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| Author: | Dream Lord [ Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:06 pm ] |
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Love is the flame of the everlasting candle Sometimes it is snuffed out Only to be relit Love is the warm embrace The loving caress The soft kiss Love is meant for everyone But you must look to find it You must keep looking and never lose hope Love is like a flower It takes work to keep it alive It won’t survive on its own Love is trust beyond a doubt Always knowing that the person you love will be there Especially during the bad times Love is the most wonderful thing in existence It is the most valuable thing to a person And it can’t be traded or measured I wrote this and it isn't very good, but I would like to hear what you guys think about it. Please keep the nonesense posts to a minimum. |
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| Author: | Jake [ Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:45 pm ] |
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well i like it!!! |
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| Author: | wut2say [ Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:33 pm ] |
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its not exactly the type of poems that i would read............. but it is good! |
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| Author: | Dream Lord [ Tue Feb 21, 2006 9:09 pm ] |
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Thanks guys. What does everyone else think? |
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| Author: | Jishdefish [ Tue Feb 21, 2006 11:25 pm ] |
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Hmm.... It needs some sort of downside.... |
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| Author: | Dream Lord [ Wed Feb 22, 2006 4:48 pm ] |
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What do you mean? |
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| Author: | Jishdefish [ Wed Feb 22, 2006 4:54 pm ] |
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Sometimes love doesn't last and is never rekindled... You watch to many movies.... |
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| Author: | Dream Lord [ Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:19 pm ] |
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It seemed to fit, and you can almost always find love if you want to find it. If you don't want it, then you won't find it. |
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| Author: | Firuweata [ Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:01 pm ] |
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Keep it how it is (with happiness), and call yourself a transendentalist poet... |
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| Author: | Neco the Nightwraith [ Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:46 am ] |
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I think it's a very good poem. It would certainly get an A if it had been entered into the English project I did (it was a 'senior project', for high school, kinda fun but the whole time you're asking "Why?") The only plus about the project was that you got to post on 39poems.com. |
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