Love is the flame of the everlasting candle
Sometimes it is snuffed out
Only to be relit
Love is the warm embrace
The loving caress
The soft kiss
Love is meant for everyone
But you must look to find it
You must keep looking and never lose hope
Love is like a flower
It takes work to keep it alive
It won’t survive on its own
Love is trust beyond a doubt
Always knowing that the person you love will be there
Especially during the bad times
Love is the most wonderful thing in existence
It is the most valuable thing to a person
And it can’t be traded or measured
I wrote this and it isn't very good, but I would like to hear what you guys think about it. Please keep the nonesense posts to a minimum.
Poem I wrote
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its not exactly the type of poems that i would read............. but it is good!
If you were to juggle a lion, and a house cat, the end result would look something like a tattered chunk of red fabric. The cat would scratch anything within reach, and the lion would just eat you. The lesson to learn? Make sure you eat your spinach.
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I think it's a very good poem. It would certainly get an A if it had been entered into the English project I did (it was a 'senior project', for high school, kinda fun but the whole time you're asking "Why?")
The only plus about the project was that you got to post on 39poems.com.
The only plus about the project was that you got to post on 39poems.com.
Fear sam bith a loisgeas a mhà s, ‘s e fhèin a dh’fheumas suidhe air.
Far an taine ‘n abhainn, ‘s ann as mò a fuaim.
Is ladarna gach cù air a shitig fhèin.
Far an taine ‘n abhainn, ‘s ann as mò a fuaim.
Is ladarna gach cù air a shitig fhèin.
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