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Rider (film)

Post by Corva »

I am writing a film called rider and I would like to know what people think of it. Here is the synopsis.

Rider is a film where a person finds a group of egg-like things in a cave and takes them home. He soon realises that they are dragon eggs when one hatches. The hatchling chooses him as its rider and a mental link is forged and he becomes a Dragon Rider. The dragon grows and she takes on the name Midnight. Eventually she becomes big enough to fly with a rider and they start flying. Meanwhile an ancient order descended from the nights of the Templar has learnt of the dragons’ existence and are intent on killing the last dragons on earth.. The rider takes the eggs to people he knows and presents them. They hatch out and only one is left un-hatched. The new riders are told how to care for them. Meanwhile the governments of Britain and America find out about the dragons and search for them. The dragons grow quickly and the riders mount. The remaining egg falls to the ground and hatches as it is falling. The dragon flies out and vanishes into a rift in time and everyone follows the new dragon into the rift.
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Post by Falconer »

Now where have we seen this before?
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Post by Corva »

I dunno.
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Post by + Silver - Orbs + »

Sounds like Eragon to me. Plus also sounds like a mix of pretty much all dragon films I've seen / heard of
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Post by Corva »

Who was it that said 'stealing from one author is plagurism, stealing from two or three authors is literal dissentment (or something) and stealing from many authors is masterful research.'

By the way I'm not suprised that it sounds a lot like other Dragon films/books because I'm unconsciously copying some of the stuff. And saphira was not the last dragon, she was the last female dragon. I'm not suprised it sounds like Eragon. There a simalarities in the plot line.
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Post by dragonfly »

most dragon stories do tend to sound a little alike (probably from something in our subconscious that guides our opinions)
but putting something in that's new and refreshing can counteract that and blend it all into a newer, more original story. otherwise it can tend to get a little tedious
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Post by wut2say »

dragonfly is right. you may want to input some of your ideas that are a bit out there that you really dont see much. that would make "Rider" WAY better
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Post by Corva »

It is set in the modern day. Modern day=Better technology.
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Post by dragonfly »

yes, but you still have the old knights in shining armor attacking the "evil" dragon, it's just that the armor has changed and we have machine guns, not swords.
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Post by Chalgrish »

Interesting. I based my book (Which failed) around 'dragons' as a symbol come to life.
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Post by Corva »

Not as such as you have the government trying to capture the dragons to use in war. Also I'll have to add in Protect The Dragon hippie groups.... ....maybe.
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Post by Falconer »

"Protect the dragon" groups? Who else but a dragon fanatic would think out stuff like that?
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Post by wut2say »

it maybe a dragon fanatic thought, but i like it. i dont think many would come up with it and it would add something a bit funny to the movie
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See, i'm laughing and i haven't even seen the movie yet.
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Post by Corva »

*looks around*. Can't see any dragon fanatics here.
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Post by + Silver - Orbs + »

Is that sarcasm I detect there DR? :wink:
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Post by Corva »

Yep. I'm thinkling about writing a book in time with the movie and releasing them within a month of each other.
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Post by phebus »

sorry! i thought that this was eragon! maybe get some ideas from others! i started writing astory 5 years ago! as of yet. no one has done anything like mine! :? [/quote]
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Post by Corva »

I am not doing this film yet. I have a vampire one I am going to do tjo start off. And this is a dead thread.
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