Kroatone, the novel.

[kroatone]

Maybe, keep in mind however my book is a work of fiction. Some skills, abilities and attributes of my characters are intended to entertain and not to educate. I.e, don't read my book and then go try to blow up the Vatican because you believe in a conspiracy between the Catholic church and dragon. In the end read my book, but treat it like the E-Drake series, that is as a work of fiction. Thank you.

[raptor]

Oh, you're very welcome.

And I am not crazy, I know the differences between fact and fiction. I'm not going to blow anything or anyone up.

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

*sighs and starts packing the c4 back into the box and putting the bazooka back in the van*

[raptor]

Not funny, not funny one bit.

[kroatone]

now now, we can still blow something up, it just has to be practical. I got it America's Economy!!!!!!!!

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

Yay *Starts unpacking the c4 and grabs the bazooka from the van and begins to draw schematics on how to blow America's Economy up in the most showy way*

[kroatone]

How is it we can turn any topic into a role playing adventure?

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

Talent i guess

[kroatone]

hmm, I'll drink to that.

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

*Ire lifts a flagon of mead to kroa in toast and begins to drink his honeyed beverage*

[kroatone]

just a brief update for those of you showing interest in my book. I've had a bit of time to write recently given all of the snow days. I rest ow at 22 chapters and will indeed pass my mandate of 25 chapters. Dragon(or Xenogon) characters in the story now include Kroatone, Shinto, Hasna, Crontro, Tycorro, Luinara, Pandora, Eseta, Roanoke, Hrontor and many still to be named. Thanks for the help and inspiration friends.

[Drakel]

well I'll let you borrow a few of my names.... just don't disappoint me kk


BTW: It takes ALL of my creativity to make up GOOD dragon names that are both hard to pronounce and 100% creative so yah.. I have a head ache now.


Male Dragon names how to pernounce
Garronath (gAre-ron-noth)
Mattorell (Mat-tor-el)
Ballistor (ball-ist-or)
Vahllen (Val-len)
Hadrothell (hay-droth-el)

Female Dragon Names
Jacorra (ja-car-ra )
Zallie (zall-ie)
Shathorra (sha-thor-ra
Vortallen ( vor-tall-en)

[kroatone]

(You mean male and female mon ami? lol)

Thanks for the added names, keep in mind I using these name for dragons and some Xenogon(a parallel race that is basically a link between dragons and humans that play a large part in the story).

[Drakel]

isn't that why I gave them

Srry about the misspelling (I blame my word doc lol)

[kroatone]

yes, I just wanted to point out that some of these "dragon" names are actually going to some Xenogon.

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

Cool can't wait to read it

[kroatone]

hey everyone, I'm having a anatomy issue with my Xenogon race withing my story. They are a dragon/human hybrids species that play a large part in the book. They are reptilian looking humanoids. They have ivory talons extending from there fingers tips, with small spikes emerging from their knuckles. The are generally taller than humans and also have protruding spines running down their backs. Their teeth are dragon like along with most of their facial features. O.k, now that you know what I am working with, here is my issue. It's a simple case of "Tail vs No tail" I can't decide with model I like best, so I am asking my intended readers.(you) If they were equipped with a tail it would similar to a dragons.(possibly with the sines on their back contining on)

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

DEFINITELY ADD THE TAIL no seriously I think tails add to the draconic look much better than no tail Otherwise its just a scaly man

[Drakel]

yah, I would add the tail because you can’t have a cool dragon without the tail lol. Also there are some very kick A demons with tails so if you add them up you should add the tail for both a Draconic & demonic like look that you wanted. Trust me it would be worth it.

[kroatone]

I had the exact same though at first, then I drew some sketches but they were rubbish as I am an author not an artist. After watch Avatar for the second time I really began to like the idea of a tail. I've been continuously been watch that movie to study its flight scenes. They are very much what I want my readers to visualise wile reading a flight scene.

[kroatone]

ok guys, tails it is. (I was hoping it would end that way). I wanted tails, but I wasn't sure it would work. Now I know it will, thanks, you don't know how much your help means.

[Drakel]

no problem, It's all one could do for friend in need.

[kroatone]

aye mo chara

[kroatone]

ok friends as you can see I'm am alive!!! Seriously though, I've been off for a while. Between school and my writing I don't get on much. Thought I would update you on my story so far. I just past my mandate of 25 chapters and am still writing, this is great. I'm midway into the 26th and intend to go a bit farther. It's finally coming together tough. Finally getting ready for the final fight. Oh and Drakel your a saint. That last batch of dragon names really helped fill the gap of nameless characters. Thanks bro. See you in the future friends...

[Forgotten Dragon's Ire]

SWEET!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT.
No really it is great to see you are still alive i was beginning to worry about you