a story idea that i'm debating on
Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:28 pm
What if i was to say that i wanted to try and write a story about some people whose father was killed in WWI and the brother of the two children must take care of his younger sister because she has basically lost her mind.
What if i was also to say that the reason the girl has lost her mind is because she saw their father killed(they lived in Bosnia and when the Germans attacked their father "got in the German's way" and was killed).
What if i was to tell you that i want the story to start out with how the girl is now (after the war is over) and how her brother takes care of her and then have it go back to before and including the day that their father was killed.
What if i told you that i would go through how they survived for a few years after their father's death until the brother was able to get them a place to stay.
would you encourage me to write this story?
What if i was also to say that the reason the girl has lost her mind is because she saw their father killed(they lived in Bosnia and when the Germans attacked their father "got in the German's way" and was killed).
What if i was to tell you that i want the story to start out with how the girl is now (after the war is over) and how her brother takes care of her and then have it go back to before and including the day that their father was killed.
What if i told you that i would go through how they survived for a few years after their father's death until the brother was able to get them a place to stay.
would you encourage me to write this story?