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The land is awash with blood. The power of fire has corrupted all of the once noble beings of the dragon clan. One by one all are corrupted. Good beings turn evil, evil beings turn worse. Those whom resist perish,Those who don't resist are corrupted. One girl currently is not corrupted, she is fighting the power of fire. If she can defeat it she will be able to restore peace to the world.

So,What do you all think?

Erm looks good enought o me but just tel me if there are any complications with my profile and il change them!

Name: Drian
Age: 212
Race: Anthro Dragon/Human
Class: Creature
Element: Fire/Frost
Alignment: Chaotic
Magic ability: N/A
Special Character abilities: Shape shift from Dragon to human for Disguise

PHYSICAL ATTRIBUTES

Height: 8 ft to shoulders, 10 ft to head As dragon
Length: 16 ft from tail to snout As dragon
Weight: 662kg As dragon
Build: Medium
Eye color: Hazel until battle then red
Complexion: Red hide
Other: spiked wings, short neck, spikes down back, white strips down wings and back, Resistance to Fire and Acid but weak to Water
Armor: My armor is my scales together with heat nothing can harm me except the power of water!
Weaponry: I use my sword (Kienna) and my body serves as my weapon but as an exception Fire breath and Tail!

ATTACK

Spell name: Fire Breath
Element: Fire
Power level: Mediocre
Physical description: Breath flames in every direction in a 25 meter Radius
Limitation: Limited power and time!

Spell name: Hinotama
Element: fire
Power level: Proficient
Physical description: Fires fire balls from mouth at opposition
Limitation: Easily blocked or dodged

Spell name: Earth shake
Element: Earth
Power lever: Mediocre
Physical description: Stamps rapidly to shake the earth around self
Limitation: No effect on wind or flying Opposition

DEFENSE

Spell name: fire wall
Element: Fire
Power level: Minimal
Physical description: Breaths wall of fire to defend self in sticky situation!
Limitation: Easily broken by wind or water

Spell name: Supersonic
Element: wind
Power level: Mediocre
Physical Description: Run away at supersonic speed
Limitation: Can be caught

History- Drians father, (a Great dragon govenor) was killed in battle leaving drian to rule the land his father owned, He turned down the offer and went on a quest to find and kill the man who killed his father. Upon Drians hatred of his Brother he soon found a hatred for humans but learned to live as one of them. He ended up becoming disguised as a human and living a human life until he was unveiled as a dragon and had to leave. That is where his Quest began.

Here is Mine


Name-Miru

Class-Wind Dragon

Age-14

Race-Manakete

Element- Windfire

Alignment- Balanced Chaos

Magic ability- Moderate to high ( depends on the day of the week )

Spells

Sabre-Blades of wind engulf enemy
Level-Moderate
Drawbacks-none

Istlari- Blades of Windfire destroy enemy
Strength-Very High
Drawbacks- Causes user to collapse


Physical Attributes

Eye Color- silver

Hair Color Gold

Build- Light, Speedy

Height-5 feet 6 inches

Armor-none

Weapons-Doule edged Wind Katana named Istlari (can also be used for casting spells)

Other abilities

can control weather

aborbs magic as stamina

if wind is blowing strength is doubled

weakness- poison

if poisoned must be cured quickly or death may happen

becomes immune to poisons that have already affected her

can breathe fire, ice as a weapon

I would like 10 people to join my RPG
At the very least 7 people

1) most people here are from the Drawings, and few people like you THERE
2) you have no plot, setting, hook, and reason for us to join
3)Stop while you're ahead. At the moment, you're relatively new, and need more influence on the boards before many people will join your RP.

Thats what ive told him.

But he did write that book. Or hes writing it.

Chalgrish you want my character's backround?
Here it is.


Her past blackened by fire.The power of time grows thin.
While fire left her helpless. The mystery of life within.
The fire left is poison. The wind is all that is left.
The blackened fire broken. The power of wind has left.
The power of magic is gone.
Her past charred by fire.
So she starts her journey.
Never to return.

that's useless.

I was wondering around the forum and stumbleed across this and thought I might offer a word of advice, seeing as I'm one of the most senior members here at present.

Miru+Ryu, basically, what Chalgrish is saying is that you haven't provided a viable back story or plot for this thread. People reading your OOC want to know what the conflict is, why is it going on, what will your characters be doing to try and deal with that conflict, what direction are you going with it? At least a couple of these need to be answered if you want people to join. Also, having ten people join might not be the best idea. As the thread's coordinater, you have to make sure that you can keep up with everyone's characters, and such. So I'd advis maybe taking the number down.

Other than those little quirks, I think the basic premise that you've provided sounds interesting, but just in general, give those who might see this REASON to join by telling them what their characters are getting themselves into.

It is a war between those corrupted by fire and those resisting. Not many are able to resist power; those who do however are gifted with the power of windfire. As the only non-corrupted fire it is its job to restore balance to this chaotic realm. Windfire itself is a being that surrvived the battle with the dak god Maen. Windfire it is saud became the same element used to battle the dark god. The Lord of the manakette,Ryu,is currently the sole person that controls the element windfire. His daughter Miru is the only one that remains uncorrupted, but is very sick with Wind fever,
and if not cured quickly would die. Ryu conforted his daughter, but after his daughter was cured he too caught the sickness and died two days later. With nobody to control windfire the balance Ryu fought hard for vanished like dust in the wind. Only he knew how to control windfire; Legend has it his daughter can inherit his talent, but she must find the instructions to Windfire's tomb tht are scattered across with the 4 gods of wind across the continent of Ethvedrahaen. So the tale starts with Miru mourning her father's death in the chapel of the wind the home to one of the four wind gods, Ryusen,Miru's sister recently inherited this title, but the castle itself is a maze. Many trials await those who join will you help Miru. Without your help Miru will surly perish at the hands of the challanges set for her. So I call upon you for help.

Now thats better

You really think it is good!?!!

STOP SHOWING THE OUTLINE!


save what you have there for the actual RPG.
TELL us how this is going to work.

IE,

Setting: kingdom, time, place
plot: common history
hook: interesting twist.

Look at other RPGs like Angel Feathers, Lost Soul, and Daemon Star.

The kingdom of Raikaze in the year 1111, The power of windfire recently broken. Many people turned slaves by the flashfire clan. Miru tries to restore peace but fails and becomes a slave to a master called Maen, luckily Maen's son Drian freed Miru and now accompanies Miru on her quest. The next kingdon is Sukaze which is ruled by Miru's sister Ryusen, MIru is caught by her sister and thrown is jail to be executed in a few days...... Talk about sibling rivalry

a little adjustment could be used, but now you have it.

Good I hoped you would like that better.

Name: Jadrian
Age: 143
Race: Elven Ranger
Class: Archer/Warrior
Element: WindFire
Alignment: Order
Special Character abilities: Inhuman speed, can talk to pet eagle

PHYSICAL ATTRIBUTES

Height: 6'2 ft
Weight: 140 pds
Build: medium
Complexion: Albino-like with black hair
Armor: Extremely tough armor crafted out of Dragon-Scales, though extremely light.
Weaponry: light hand-and-a-half sword crafted out of Dragon-Scales, A Dwarf-forged sheild, and a Orc-horn bow.


DEFENSE

Spell name: Teleportation
Element: Pshycic
Power level: Average
Physical description: Can instantly teleport self, anyone or anything
Limitation: If attacked while spelling, spell stops

You may join if you wish.

thank you

By the way,all elements are mixed with fire so If you element is wind you are of the Windfire element

water- Tidefire

Lightning- Flashfire

wind-Windfire

ice-Frostfire

Light- Brightfire

Dark- Nightfire

Earth-Crushfire

Only pure fire is hard to come by so if someone is already pure fire add pure fire at your class advancement if you wish, but only one character can be pure fire in the beginning( Talked about far later in the RPG )

Okay while I wait for Talus's character to arrive if there are any suggestions,before I start please say so know.

Also I would like to keep the story going so I would appreciate if you would post once a fortnight ( 14 days )

Once we begin a few other character will probably join midstory so be on your Guard.

Name-Siekent of the Ryutono Clan
Class-Ninja
Age-11
Race-Half-elf
Element-I would like PureFire
Alignment- Chaotic-Neutral
Magic ability- Average

Spells

Smoke- Creates a wall of impenetrable smoke
Level-Moderate
Drawbacks-none

Shuriken Barrage-Creates shurikens of fire
Strength-High
Drawbacks- Idano


Physical Attributes

Eye Color- Pale green

Hair Color-Pale green

Build- EXTAREEMLEE Agile

Height-4' 7"

Armor-enchanted Dragon ninja garb

Weapons- Shurikens, Kunai's, a wakizashi...ya know...the usual ninja stuff

History:
Siekent was the son of a well-known shinobi, who was the leader of the Ryutono clan. One day, his parents and clan-mates were killed in a violent household struggle against an opposing ninja tribe. At the tender age of seven, he slew his first person. Siekent has been on his own by himself. To survive in this world, he hardened himself and trusted no one. Many people think he is weak or not as smart as themselves, those people are dead. Many say Siekent will grow up to be a feared and powerful ninja, and a cold-blooded killer, the sad truth is, at the age 11, he already has.

Alright Talus you're in!!!