Fire Burning

[Shadowdragon]

The flower burns and never stops.
Its black pedals never fall.
It is never ending.
It is the soul thing that keeps
the dark soul living.
It feeds him, it loves him.
It will never stop its burning
it will watch him and guard him.
The dark soul will never know
that the rose will never die.
Yet he cries for it because
he believes it is dieing,
cause all the dark soul can see
is the blackened pedals and nothing more.

I am really sorry about how depressing it is. i just pulled this out of my collection. I thought that the Artworks form was looking a little sad with nothing in it.

[Aspaheir]

Hey! Wasn't that EXX's old signature?! You can't just copy signatures like that! Cool poem though. It made me sob.

[Shadowdragon]

yeah, but i had wrote it. It was on my AIM info. i wrote it one day to give it somthing. I also published under my name in my senior year in my year book before it was used as a signerture. so please don't get offended, i am just using my own work.

[Malchios]

albeit lacks an iambic pentameter, it is an excellent piece...sad, but not TOO depressing.

[Shadowdragon]

I like to write really late. Sometimes i don't even know what i have wroten until i wake up in the morning. It kind of freaky sometimes.

[Draches]

I like it. and all i write is depressed emotional stuff. yeah, but mine usually rhymes and has iambic pentameter. just cuz i don't like to read it if it doesnt.

[Delmerious]

i have 3 words stylish,nifty, and well thought

[Shadowdragon]

Thank you, Del, Draches, Malchios and Aspaheir for your coments its vary sweet of you.

[+ Silver - Orbs +]

nice poem. very expressive